Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate

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2 users have written reviews for the Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate novel and rated it with an average score of 3.5 out of 5.

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Claire
Claire
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4 months ago
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I really enjoyed reading this, being more than just a werewolf pack story it encompasses the fantasy world much more. But it was let down by several factors;

Maybe the sites requirements for censorship is at fault, but we really don't need words like attitude censoring (att*i*tide is just silly) the consistency of the censoring changes all the time too, so it is distracting to the flow of reading.

There are too many instances of incorrect characters being referred to, several times Ann hated her sister, Ann (when it would be Ada).

A few paragraphs where poor writing meant the reader was thrown from 3rd person to 1st person writing.

There were times where it was unclear who's point of view we were seeing the story from just having to go with it until finally the character is told or deciphered from context.

The biggest problems came towards the end of the book.
Lexis story is riddled with problems, she at one point knows her uncle, she's ashamed of knowing him but was a child. but later on it's said her memories of him had been fully hidden from her and there a big reveal of these memories for her. Inconsistent writing.

Her 2 mates change their 'purpose' after establishing Allen was for her Daemon side (confirmed with Aoifes use of magic to calm lexis mage side) to out of nowhere swap so Allen is for the mage side. It fit the story plot better for it to be that way so previous cannon was overwritten, very displeasing and shows poor writing.

Not sure what happened on the last chapters random letters all over the place.

The overall reasons for why things happened throughout the entire book were poor and the reader is left disappointed that there isn't a satisfying conclusion to that element.
Then have the wrap up parts of the book seem to skip over other elements, not even a hint to a time skip that has set these in motion and heading forwards positively, instead being given a hasty end. It left an unsatisfied taste as I 'closed the book'.

carlene nye
carlene nye
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4 months ago
(4)

I have read 150 chapters so far and out of all the werewolf books I've read I like this one the most and I am looking forward to reading the rest of it

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